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Title: The Ghost Monument REVISED
Author: betawho
Rating: PG
Characters: 13th Doctor, Yaz, Ryan, Graham
Words: 7053

Season 11 has been a bit dull for me. So I wondered if editing the scripts might improve it.

This is a revised version of the  Doctor Who episode "Ghost Monument." Edited to remove repeated dialogue, clarify explanations, shift some dialogue to different characters, and fix some scenes that seemed out of character. Hopefully this will make the story more exciting and flow smoother. See if you can find the changes, and let me know what you think works.( Read more...Collapse )

Title: Husbandly
Author: betawho
Rating: PG
Characters: 11th Doctor, River Song
Words: 529

Summary: Something about River made the Doctor feel very husbandly...( Read more...Collapse )

Title: Necking
Author: betawho
Rating: G
Characters: 12th Doctor, Nardole, Bill Potts
Words: 617

Summary: Bill Potts walks in on the 12th Doctor doing something very strange to Nardole's neck...( Read more...Collapse )

Title: Junk Room
Author: betawho
Rating: G
Characters: 10th Doctor, Donna Noble
Words: 376

Summary: Donna is trying to learn to fly the Tardis. But she just can't get the hang of it...( Read more...Collapse )

Title: He Wasn't a Boy
Author: betawho
Rating: PG
Characters: 11th Doctor, River Song
Words: 513

Summary: Despite his boyish exterior, the Doctor was not a boy. Most people refused to see below the surface...( Read more...Collapse )

Title: Domestic Bliss
Author: betawho
Rating: G
Characters: 12th Doctor, River Song
Words: 295

Summary - They'd taken a house for their 24 year long night on Darillium. It was novel for both of them to actually live together. She was finding it was full of unexpected pleasures...( Read more...Collapse )

Title: Locked and Loaded
Author: betawho
Rating: PG
Characters: 11th Doctor, River Song
Words: 297

Summary: The Doctor and River are always getting locked up...( Read more...Collapse )

Title - Horror Story
Author - betawho
Characters - 11th Doctor, Jack Harkness
Rating - PG
Words - 250

From the prompt: "We shall each write a ghost story. - One which would speak to the mysterious fears of our nature, and awaken thrilling horror - one to make the reader dread to look round, to curdle the blood, and quicken the beatings of the heart..." - Mary Shelly (Frankenstein)( Read more...Collapse )

I gave myself a writing challenge yesterday, to write one short story for all 12 Doctors, all in one day.

Unfortunately, I only got four done, the 1st, 2nd, 3rd, and 10th Doctors.

So here's a quick dose of Doctor Who fun for today. Enjoy:


Culture Clash  -  Ian and Barbara find it harder to adapt to interstellar culture than they'd thought. Even trying to be polite could get you into trouble...( Read more... )

Clambake - The Second Doctor, Jamie and Victoria are digging for clams on an alien beach, but things aren't always what you expect with the Doctor around...( Read more... )

Puff -  The 3rd Doctor's always getting chased by monsters, one way or another...( Read more... )

Clothes -  The 10th Doctor finds Donna in the wardrobe trying to find something to wear...( Read more... )



Let me know what you think.

Title: Clothes
Author: betawho
Rating: PG
Characters: 10th Doctor, Donna Noble
Words: 404

Summary:  The 10th Doctor finds Donna in the wardrobe trying to find something to wear...( Read more...Collapse )